On the tip of the maple leaf,
The tangerine rays of the sun
Announce a pristine beginning.
As the aroma of the prime
Blends with the innocent breeze,
And the chirps bring the seraphic chimes,
I see a new boulvard ahead,
Opening to a new horizon,
New dreams.
Life is beckoning again....
nice....too strong words though ! think i need te dictionary !
ReplyDeleteA sense of FEELING beyond belief, perched above d Blue Sky..
ReplyDeleteI see a Dewdrop ova a leaf, as if a tear jus plunged down an Angel's Eye..
Cant i Hold it!!!! n keep it SHIELDED cried ma Lonely Heart...
A Luv so Pure, A Luv so Exquisite makes ma Soul Apart...
ur words r beautifull, ur dreams r so pure... hope this new found begginin brings u heavenly luv n care... god bless u...
hmmm.....nice one eve.....liked the flow of emotions.....read ur other posts too , gal , u hv some vent for emotions ! stem the flow n direct it , u wud grow as a great writer....all the best....
ReplyDelete@sophie..ur so ryte..loved that language so thot of mixing them with my imagination to create smthing new...nyways i lov ur writing sophie
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